Hello，my name is Zhang Songpei. I’m eleven years old. I study in Chang’an No. 1 Primary School in Dongguan City.

My school is very beautiful. Let’s have a look！After enter the school gate，there is a small square. Go through the square，there is a teaching building. The teachers’ offices are on first floor and they are on the left. Our principal’s office is on the second floor. Our principal is a lady. She’s strict，but kind. The classrooms are on the right of the teaching building. You can see many flowers around the teaching building. Near the teaching building，you can see a park. It’s small but beautiful. There is a river in the park. You can see some fish swimming in the river. How lively they are! Over the river，there is a small bridge. There is a gym in our school. In the gym，you can see many sports equipments. Near the gym，there is a big playground. Look！There are many students playing football. They are so happy!

I like my school very much!            

评：本篇作文条例清晰，逻辑清楚，用词准确。小作者很详细、生动地介绍了自己的学校。